Historical and literary commentary

    The history of the discovery of the “Word” and the reasons for the appearance of “dark places” in the text. Analysis of difficult-to-understand fragments of the Lay.

    Historical commentary on persons and events (participants in the campaign, its causes, circumstances and consequences for Kievan Rus).

    Genre nature of “The Lay”. The combination of folklore and book, lyrical and epic principles in “The Lay”. Manifestation methods author's position.

    The style of monumental historicism in the Lay.

    Historical and literary analysis of the following fragments of “The Lay”:

    prologue (the function of the introduction in the embodiment of the ideological and artistic concept of the work; the role of the Boyan tradition in the creative consciousness of the author of “The Lay”);

    camping preparations and solar eclipse scene (similarities and differences in the depiction of these scenes in the chronicle and in the “Tale”);

    prophetic dream” and “golden word” of Svyatoslav (historical and fictional principles in the interpretation of the image of Svyatoslav, the role of the “golden word” in the embodiment of the ideological plan);

    Yaroslavna's cry (folklore tradition of crying; history and fiction);

    Igor's return from captivity (reasons for violation historical facts in the finale, the difference in the author’s position towards the events and characters described in the “Word” and the chronicle source).

7. The artistic significance of the “Word” in the history of Russian literature.

    Read the ancient Russian text of “The Lay” and its translation into modern Russian, write down several “dark passages” that have different interpretations in scientific literature, and determine their meaning (for example, “bosuvi lies”, “wild of Kisan”, “Tmutorokansky blvan”, “Karna and Zhlya”, “Dazhbozh’s grandson”, “Velesov’s grandson”, “Troyani’s veche”, “Stribozhi vnutsi”, “Bebryan sleeve”, “Shereshiry”, “Paporzi”, “Kharaluzhny swords”, etc.); define and justify your position.

    Based on chronicle story, placed in the Ipatiev Chronicle, a geographical map and a genealogical table of Russian princes, prepare a story about Prince Igor’s campaign against the “Polovtsian steppe”. Compare the depiction of the events of the campaign in the Lay and in the chronicle story. How are they different? How do the chronicler and the author of the Lay evaluate the events of the campaign? Make the appropriate notes. What do you think explains the difference in their positions?

    Write down from the text “Words” examples of depicting objects (persons, phenomena) from a large (1) spatial, (2) temporal, (3) hierarchical distance. Is it possible, based on your extracts, to conclude that the style of monumental historicism is manifested in the Lay?

Literature:

A word about Igor's regiment: 800 years. Old Russian text. Translations and adaptations. Poetic variations. - M., 1986.

Chronicle story about the campaign of Prince Igor// Tales of Ancient Rus': XI-XII centuries. – L.: Lenizdat, 1983; Chronicle stories about the campaign of Prince Igor(from the Ipatiev and Laurentian Chronicles) // PLDR: XII century. – M.: Artist. lit., 1980.

Likhachev D.S.“The Tale of Igor’s Campaign.” Historical and literary essay. - M., 1976.

Eremin I.P.“The Tale of Igor’s Campaign” as a monument to the political eloquence of Kievan Rus. // Eremin I.P. Lectures and articles on the history of ancient Russian literature.

Rybakov B.A. Pyotr Borislavovich. Search for the author of “The Tale of Igor’s Campaign”. - M., 1991.

Robinson A.N. Solar symbolism in “The Tale of Igor’s Campaign” // “The Tale of Igor’s Campaign”. Monuments of literature and art of the XI-XVII centuries. - M., 1978.

Practical lesson No. 5

The task of a textual critic is not only to establish the exact text of an author’s work, but also to comment on it. The first scientific commentary publication was the publication of Pushkin, edited by Annenkov (1857).

Comment- this is an interpretation of the text of the work as a whole from one side or another.

Types of comments:

1) Textual - a set of information characterizing the state of the writer’s literary heritage and illuminating the direction and nature of the work of the textual editor in preparing the text of each work included in the publication. In accordance with this, the textual commentary should contain the following sections:

2) Historical and literary commentary. The goal is to connect this work with the era, the history of the country, to explain to the reader its ideological content and artistic skill of the writer, to tell how the work was received by readers and critics of that time. This type of commentary should help the reader to more correctly and better assimilate, understand, and comprehend the writer’s work, his artistic skill, and his ideological positions.

3) Vocabulary commentary. Its goal is to explain to the reader those words and figures of speech that differ from the usual usage in modern literary language and therefore may. not understood by the reader or misunderstood. Such words and phrases include archaisms, professionalisms, dialectisms, neologisms, words with a changed meaning, etc.

4) Real comments. In fact, this is a system of references to the author’s text, which should pursue three main goals:

Revealing names, hints, allegories.

Providing the reader with factual information necessary to understand the text.

Textual commentary. Its structure and characteristics

Textual - a set of information characterizing the state of the writer’s literary heritage and illuminating the direction and nature of the work of the textual editor in preparing the text of each work included in the publication. In accordance with this, the textual commentary should contain the following sections:

List of all text sources.

Justification for the attribution of works.

Justification for dating the works.

A brief overview of text theory.

List of corrections made to the text.

The first section of the textual commentary provides an exhaustive list of all text sources, arranged in chronological order, with handwritten and printed sources being grouped separately.

The second section occurs only in cases where the published work is not signed with the name of the author, and if its ownership by this author has been proven long ago, the textual critic is limited to a brief reference, indicating by whom, when and where the attribution was made, what additions and new arguments were later added to it and arguments. But if the work is published for the first time as belonging to the author in this edition, then the editor in the commentary is obliged to give a full statement of the attribution arguments.

The third is given in all cases. Here the editor should not limit himself to references to predecessors, so the commentary on each work should contain information about the dating. Sometimes it might. simple help.

In other cases, the editor must provide an expanded dating argument, especially in cases where he has set a date for a given publication or changed a previously accepted one. In cases where there is an author's date that the editor rejects, he must provide the necessary extended argumentation.

The fourth gives a coherent account of the history of the text from conception to the last authorized edition. This is always the research work of a textual critic, who logically reveals all stages of the author’s work and gives a detailed description of the sources that were listed in the first section, necessarily with their description, features of the form and content of the text, with an analysis of changes in the author’s intention. It is in this section that the editor must prove the correctness of the choice of the source of the main text.

The fifth should give the necessary list of corrections made by the editor to the main text. Because the main text almost never can simply be reprinted, since various types of distortions are found in it, which the editor has the right and must correct. This section of the commentary should reflect this editor’s work on the main text.

Literary-historical commentary

This edition of autobiographical prose, letters, notebooks and recordings different years- the first experience of systematic coverage of a special biography - self-creation - of the largest Russian poet of the 20th century, Osip Emilievich Mandelstam (1891–1938). The drama of this process of creation of a poetic personality - more precisely, the improvisation of fate - was due to many circumstances. “A semi-provincial, a Jew, a commoner, he did not receive the property of the Russian and European culture by natural inheritance,” wrote M. L. Gasparov about Mandelstam. “The choice of culture was for him an act of personal will; the memory of this forever remained in him the basis of his sense of his own personality with its inner freedom.”

The main inspirers of this process, the poet’s asceticism, as N.S. Gumilyov noted, “were only the Russian language... and an eternally sleepless thought.”

Autobiographical and epistolary prose of Osip Mandelstam, his “portraits” of cities - St. Petersburg, Moscow, Kyiv, Feodosia - Nadezhda Yakovlevna Mandelstam will call these essays the “city-loving”, “city-loving” of the poet! - are distinguished by a remarkable feature: he imprints himself in extremely critical, conflict, turning points, in the movement of thoughts and feelings, emphasizes the drama of any fact and impression. Mandelstam’s poetic “I” is everywhere included in the movement of history, often in a dispute with the “wolfhound century.” Hence - a rare wealth of life sensations, moral and aesthetic introspections and assessments.

This publication became possible thanks to the selfless efforts of many people who cared about the fate of the poet’s legacy. They, first of all, the scientists who prepared the first foreign edition of the works of O. E. Mandelstam in 4 volumes (1967), G. P. Struve, B. A. Filippov, from where the works, letters, and fragments of unfinished works included in this edition were taken works, as well as collectors of the poet's heritage and memoirs E. G. Gershtein, E. P. Zenkevich, P. M. Nerler, the late I. M. Semenko, N. E. Shtempel, and, of course, N. Ya. Mandelstam - sincere gratitude from the compiler of this book and, I hope, from the readers.

"The Noise of Time"

Reprinted from: O. Mandelstam. The Noise of Time. Publishing house "Time" L., 1925. Circulation 3000 copies.

The main work on this book - the story of a St. Petersburg boy from a Jewish family, without a plot or plot - took place in the fall of 1923 in Gaspra in Crimea and, probably, in 1924 in Leningrad. Advertising the upcoming publication, the owners of Vremya emphasized: “This is fiction, but at the same time it is more than reality itself... It exhausts the era.”

Among the first assessments of this autobiography of Mandelstam, the opinion of A. Lezhnev is interesting: “His phrase (Mandelshtam the narrator - V.Ch.) bends under the weight of literary culture and tradition. At the same time, his images are unique and contrasting, and the comparisons are unexpectedly true. He knocks epithets together, as Anatole France advises to do... How correctly and aptly he captured so much in this era of social decline, degenerating populism, doom, whining, impotence of the “sympathetically smoldering” intelligentsia” (“Print and Revolution”, 1929, No. 4 , pp. 151–153). For G. Fish, “The Noise of Time” is a document of “the worldview of the literary movement of “Acmeism”” (“Red Newspaper”, evening edition, Leningrad, 1925, June 30).

True, very few noticed in “The Noise of Time” the main psychological drama of the narrator - his departure from the “chaos of the Jews,” that is, an established way of life, a system of values ​​and orientation, into the kingdom of Russian culture, Christianity and the state that arose in connection with this, as N noted Lerner, “double nothingness,” “a temporary state of “neither in them nor in them,” of “wheezing longing” for both what has already been abandoned and for what has not yet been found” (“The Past.” 1929, No. 6). The émigré critic V. Veidle most accurately assessed the drama of Mandelstam’s losses and still incomplete gains: he saw that both St. Petersburg Russia and the “Jewish chaos” “are akin to Mandelstam, but they are akin to him in different ways: “He unmistakably conveys the very smell and taste of Jewry, and the air of St. Petersburg, and the sound of St. Petersburg pavements. The second homeland is more important and dearer to him than the first.’” (“Days.” Paris, 1925, November 15).

Mandelstam’s memoirs, as an example of cultural-historical, diary prose, full of “energy of thought”, depth and fidelity to historical intuition, also became the topic of correspondence with B. Pasternak. He will write to the author of “The Noise of Time”: “The full sound of this book, which found a happy expression for many elusiveness... was so riveting, carried so confidently and well that it was a pleasure to read and reread it” (“Literary Review”. 1990, No. 2 ). For A. Akhmatova, “The Noise of Time” is a lesson in writing about history, a model for her “The Running of Time” (1915), an object of admiration for the load on the word, on the detail. “Osip is rich, rich,” E. Gerstein recalled her assessment of Mandelstam’s world of cultural values, the focus of refined culture.

Music in Pavlovsk. Described concert hall in the building of the Pavlovsky railway station in the 1890s, when the Mandelstam family lived in Pavlovsk. “Talk about. Dreyfus"; "The names of Colonels Esterhazy and Picard"- the subject of newspaper articles about the trial of the French officer Gentshab A. Dreyfus: (1859–1935), accused of espionage for Germany in 1894; "Kreutzer Sonata"(1891) - story by L. N. Tolstoy; “Figner was losing his voice”- we are talking about the singer N. N. Figner, soloist of the Mariinsky Theater; “Church of Catherine” is a Catholic church on Nevsky Prospekt.

"Childish imperialism."Equestrian monument to Nicholas I - built 1856–1895 on St. Isaac's Square; "Kryukov Canal, Dutch Petersburg"- the so-called “New Holland” - a small island formed by the Moika River and canals; "descent of the battleship "Oslyabya"» - the squadron battleship "Oslyabya" was launched in 1898; "Likes and Opings"- types of leather.

"Riots and Frenchwomen."Funeral Alexandra III - took place on November 8, 1894; "Genevan"- follower of John Calvin (1509–1564), one of the reformers of Catholicism; wakey- Finnish cab drivers.

Bookcase. It talks about the relationship of the father and mother with the Vengerovs, Kopelyanskys, Slonimskys, Kasirers, about the poet’s grandfather and grandmother - leather sorter Veniamin Zundelovich Mandelstam and Mera Abramovna, who lived in Riga; Nadson Semyon Yakovlevich (1862–1887) Russian poet; lion Anton- A. G. Rubinstein (1829–1894) - pianist and composer; Sofia Perovskaya and Zhelyabov- Narodnaya Volya regicides.

Jewish chaos. Shavli is a place near Shauliai, the family homeland of Mandelstam in Courland; baron Gunzburg- Ginzburg Horace Osipovich (Naftali Geru) - banker, builder of a synagogue in St. Petersburg; Dorpat - now the city of Tartu; black and yellow silk scarf - Tales, a special cape that Jews wear during prayer; " Death and Enlightenment" by Strauss- symphonic poem by Richard Strauss.

Concertos of Hoffmann and Kubelik. Polish pianist and composer Joseph Hoffmann and Czech violinist Jan Kubelik often toured Russia at the end of the 19th century.

Tenishevsky School. O. E. Mandelstam entered the Tenishevsky Commercial School on September 1, 1900. A wonderful building was built for the school on Mokhovaya Street - at the expense of Prince. V. M. Tenisheva. Among the teachers were prominent scientists and teachers. Later, writers V.V. Nabokov and O.V. Volkov studied at the Tenishev School.

Erfurt program.Erfurt program- program of the German Social Democratic Party, adopted at the party congress in October. 1891 in Erfurt; Kautsky Karl (1854–1938) - one of the leaders of the Second International, broke with Marxism after the outbreak of the First World War; Pavlenkovsky edition- mass series “The Life of Remarkable People”, published by F. F. Pavlenkov in 1880–1890.

The Shinaki family. We are talking about the family of Mandelstam’s gymnasium friend Boris Sinaki (1889–1910).

Komissarzhevskaya. Komissarzhevskaya Vera Fedorovna (1864–1910) - an outstanding Russian actress; Marriage And Gedda- characters from G. Ibsen’s play “Hedda Gabler” (1890); Komissarzhevskaya, playing “Balaganchik” ... - the premiere of A. Blok’s “Balaganchik” took place at the V. F. Komissarzhevskaya Theater on December 30, 1906.

“Wearing an inappropriate lordly fur coat.”Leontyev K.N. (1831–1891) - writer, philosopher, shortly before his death he became a monk; Gippius Vladimir Vasilyevich (1876–1941) - poet and literary critic, taught Russian language and literature at the Tenishev School.

They are based on impressions from the poet’s stay (together with his brother Alexander) in September 1919 in the Crimea (Feodosia and Koktebel), and departure to Batumi (in September 1920).

The originality of Mandelstam's view - through the prism of culture, ancient mythology, through the eye of a needle of his “Hellenism” - expressed in the essays that he... somehow did not “notice” either Wrangel or Denikin. “We should be grateful to Wrangel for allowing us to breathe the purest air of the predatory Mediterranean republic of the sixteenth century,” writes Mandelstam, completely arbitrarily assessing the “evacuation,” that is, the sad exodus of tens of thousands of Russian people from Crimea in 1920, as "a joyful Atlantic flight." Of course, in reality, the entire short existence of Crimea under Wrangel was continuously overshadowed by the fact, noted by V.V. Shulgin, that “there, beyond the neck of Perekop, lies a sea of ​​poverty”, that “this captivating peninsula cannot be pampered” (V.V. Shulgin. "Days 1920". M., 1989, p.469).

Mandelstam’s well-known “softness” - or, simply put, a purely poetic, playful perception of the harshest situations, people, the “street” itself, the picturesque settlements of Feodosia! - part of his mental structure, his position “above the fray.” The modern reader owes this “softness” and the beautiful landscapes of Kerch and Feodosia: “from Mithridates (the mountains in the center of Kerch and on the outskirts of Feodosia - V.Ch.), that is, the ancient Persian Kremlin on a mountain of theatrical cardboard stone,” and no less vivid historiosophical “landscapes,” somnambulant landscapes. Now one can only be amazed at the poet’s obvious fearlessness in creating such a mental landscape of history:

“The most important thing in this landscape was the failure that formed in place of Russia. The Black Sea advanced all the way to the Neva; its waves, thick as tar, licked the slabs of Isaac, and broke with mourning foam on the steps of the Senate.”

In essence, this is the worldview - all of Russia is like Kitezh-grad, like Atlantis sank to the bottom of the flood! - is no different either from the hallucinations of I. S. Shmelev in “The Sun of the Dead” (1923), or from the sad lyrics of M. Tsvetaeva (“After Russia”, etc.). Mandelstam’s demonstrative “carefreeness”, his choice of heroes for observation and description - such is Mazesa (Moses) da Vinci, an artist and artisan who built relationships with people “on uncertainty and sweet reticence” - poorly hide his anxieties, premonitions of the end of the entire artistic era.

Travel to Armenia

The obvious autobiographical nature of this travel prose (“half-story”), created by the poet in 1931–1932, published in the magazine “Zvezda” (1933, No. 5), was noted primarily by the poet’s enemies from among those “office birds” who wrote in these years of their accusatory denunciations, “rapportichki”. "ABOUT. Mandelstam is not interested in knowledge of the country and its people, but in a whimsical verbal script that allows him to plunge into himself, to compare his internal literary baggage with random associations... The writer is armored by literary ancestors,” wrote N. Oruzheynikov (“Literary Newspaper”, 1933, No. 28 ). The accusation is “the old St. Petersburg Acmeist poet O. Mandelstam (he was 42 years old in 1933! - V.Ch.) passed by the flourishing and joyfully building socialism of Armenia” - had fatal consequences: the printing of “Travel” was suspended.

In the prehistory of the “half-story”, but rather a journey to the biblical, Mediterranean origins of culture - this is exactly what Armenia is, the “country of Nairi” for Mandelstam - not only a translation of the poem, “Dance on the Mountains” by the Armenian futurist poet Kara-Darvish in the early 20s years and N.I. Bukharin’s request dated June 12, 1929 to S.M. Ter-Gabrielyan, Chairman of the Council of People’s Commissars of the Armenian SSR, to accept a poet “ready to learn the Armenian language” to write a work about Armenia. IN in this case there is no way to list people from the nomenklatura ranks, people's commissars, directors of institutes, sanatoriums, pedagogical schools, historians, local historians who helped the poet make the trip to see Sevan, Etchmiadzin, and many ancient historical monuments. Let us only note the figure of biologist B. S. Kuzin (1903–1973), who Mandelstam met in a teahouse in the courtyard of a mosque in Yerevan, who became a close friend of the poet and interlocutor on many problems of natural science. Acquaintance with B. S. Kuzin greatly helped Mandelstam create one of his best poems, “Lamarck” (1932), about the peculiar “descent” of consciousness along the ladder of evolution to the last step.

This “he”, a companion in the descent to the “rings” and “barnacles”, in parting with Mozart, is, of course, B. S. Kuzin.

Probably the most important thing in “Journey” and in the diary cycle of poems “Armenia”, in which the image of the Armenian language (“the state of screaming stones”, “wild cat Armenian speech”, etc.) appears - is hidden, perhaps unconscious , but quite understandable to Armenian friends, support for their efforts to preserve the shrines of their culture. We must not forget that throughout the 20s and 30s, under the slogan of building an international culture in Armenia, as in Russia, obvious denationalization was often carried out. The best poets and the prose writers of Armenia (Axel Bakunts, Yeghishe Charents and others) were obliged to castigate even the images of the “country of Nairi” (the ancient name of Armenia) as “chimeras of national limitations”, to straighten the language itself, clearing it of archaisms. Anna Akhmatova will translate the poem “Our Language” by E. Charents, characteristic of such “perestroika”:

We then distort and strangle

that language that is purer than springs,

so that for today's souls

the rust of centuries has not settled.

Mental boundaries are expanding.

And they won’t express what the century breathes,

nor Teryan's sonorous hares,

Nor the parchment Narek.

For Mandelstam, the names of Vahan Teryan, the Armenian Blok, or Gregor Narekatsi, a classic of the Armenian Middle Ages, ancient villages like Ashtarak, a folk granary that “hung on the murmuring water, like on a wire,” “churches in a hexagonal kamilavka,” and finally, the Armenian language - “ unwearable like stone boots,” is the most essential, eternal thing in this country. It never occurred to him that this language was covered in the rust of centuries, that it needed to be cleaned. After all, in it:

... letters - blacksmith's pliers

And every word is a staple...

Memories. Essays.

Kyiv. The essay was published in the Kyiv Evening Newspaper in 1926, probably in May. The essay expressed - it could still be expressed - the playful nature of Mandelstam’s soul, the mischief of his thoughts when looking at the picturesque NEP life, the kingdom of signs, shops, communal apartments. “The Ukrainian-Jewish-Russian city breathes with a deep triple breath,” he writes, noting the love of life of little people, and the incidents of Ukrainization, and the greatness of building managers in the future eternal heroes Bulgakov's prose and drama.

Cold summer."Spark." 1925, No. 16. This essay, like the essay “Batum” (1922) - evidence of Mandelstam’s wanderings and nomads during the hungry years of returning to Moscow, probably became one of the themes of M. A. Bulgakov’s notes “Notes on the Cuffs” about throwing writers across Russia in search of peace, earning bread:

“The draft picked up. How the leaves fly. One is from Kerch to Vologda, the other is from Vologda to Kerch. A disheveled Osip climbs in with a suitcase and gets angry: “We won’t get there, and that’s all!” - Naturally, we won’t get there if you don’t know where you’re going!.. Osip Mandelstam. He walked in on a cloudy day and held his head high like a prince. Killed with brevity: - From Crimea. Bad. Don't people buy manuscripts from you? “...but I didn’t pay any money...” I started and before I could finish, he left. No one knows where."

Sukharevka. “Ogonyok”, 1923, No. 18. The essay in a unique way continues the theme of the poet’s “entry” into Moscow (“On the sledges laid with straw”), the development of its “Buddhist” picturesqueness. His “bazaar” is both the essence of historical Moscow, the embodiment of the other side of “golden drowsy Asia” (Yesenin), which rests here, and not on domes alone, and a threat to culture: “If you give the bazaar free rein, it will spread to the city and the city will grow wool." Now you can’t help but think about the super-everyday invasion of all kinds of beggarly “shocks”, “ clothing markets", hordes of "shuttles", people of the market, now spreading into all spheres of cities, somehow you understand differently complex meaning the poet’s worries: “It’s not for nothing that the bazaars are driven in and fenced off like a plague place...” The spill of “bazaars”, which replace the museum, the library, the theater, and the lecture hall, is, after all, the spill of counterculture, the triumph of the picturesque primitive, in a certain sense, a dictatorship.” shuttles,” bagmen, also victims of this disaster.

Letters from different years.

Fedor Kuzmich Sologub(1863–1927) - poet, prose writer, playwright, one of the senior symbolists, author of the novels “Heavy Dreams” (1883–1894), “The Little Demon” (1907), and the “New Years” trilogy (1907–1914).

Nadezhda Yakovlevna Mandelstam(1899–1980), nee Khazina, became the wife of O. E. Mandelstam in 1919. She was born in Saratov, but for many years - before meeting the poet - she lived in Kyiv. Her father was a lawyer. She knew the Kyiv artistic environment very well - poets, artists, scientists. N. Ya. Mandelstam accompanied the poet on many of his travels around Russia, was with him in Armenia, and in 1934, after his arrest and sentencing, she went with him to Cherdyn, and then to Voronezh. She left Voronezh, leaving her husband in the care of her mother and new acquaintance N.E. Shtempel, to Moscow, trying to find a home for certain manuscripts, to earn something in the editorial offices, to “get hold of life.” She, who lived for many decades “only to preserve Mandelstam - his poems, the story of his life and death” (the exact definition of M.K. Polivanov) - characterized her “Memoirs” as follows: “This is the story of my struggle with the elements, with the one that tried to lick me and the poor scraps that I was saving.” In her last letter to Osip Emilievich in 1938, which naturally did not reach him, having lain in a suitcase for thirty years, she wrote about happy poverty, that “we were like blind puppies poking at each other, and we felt good,” that “ It’s hard to die alone - alone.”

She, a person apparently very mentally strong, strong-willed, categorical in her assessments, called her connection with Mandelstam not love, but fate: “I didn’t stop him from building himself and being himself. He built himself, and at the same time me” (“Memoirs”). But in reality, apparently, she also built his character, modified many situations with her, expressed or unspoken, assessments and general view of them. In her assessments of Mandelstam’s “treasonous” poems - and, apparently, the short-lived ones themselves, even whirlwind romances poet - with actress Arbenina (Hilderbrandt) O. N. (1901–1980), O. A. Vaksel (1903–1932), N. E. Shtempel (1910–1988) - a rational, restrained, even condescending beginning, spirit prevails superiority and confidence. Olga Vaksel for her is “a girl lost in a terrible, wild city, helpless, defenseless... Before her death, Olga dictated wild, erotic memoirs to her husband, who knew Russian,” writes N. Ya. Mandelstam in “Memoirs.” In poems to N. E. Stempel she will find “a high and enlightened feeling of the future life.” And only with the memory of M.E. Petrovs will Nadezhda Yakovlevna’s calm change: she will call her a “hunter” trying her hand, and will not say anything about the truly beautiful poem “The Mistress of Guilty Glances” (1934). But among the variants of this poem, in a completely exceptional, noblest context, the name of Maria Petrov flashed:

You, Maria, are a dying help,

We must warn death - go to sleep.

I'm standing at a solid threshold.

Go away, go away, stay a little longer...

Emilius Veniaminovich Mandelstam(1856–1939) - see notes for publication of letters.

Yuri Nikolaevich Tynyanov(1884–1943) - prose writer, literary critic, one of the founders of the Society for the Study poetic language(OPOYAZ), author of the article “The Interval” (1924), apparently remembered by Mandelstam for the combination of prophetic intuition and factual, scientific and theoretical accuracy (it dealt with the poetry of A. Akhmatova, B. Pasternak, O. Mandelstam, V. Mayakovsky) .

Korney Ivanovich Chukovsky(1882–1969) - poet, translator, literary historian, most notable literary critic beginning of the 20th century.

Stavsky(Kirpichnikov) Vladimir Petrovich (1900–1943) - prose writer, essayist, since 1936 secretary of the Union of Writers of the USSR. His activities in this post are characterized by a constant desire to present himself in the role of a “signalman” of one or another class or political danger. He actually provoked repression against writers. Having gone to M. A. Sholokhov during the completion of “Quiet Flows the Don,” V. P. Stavsky immediately wrote a letter to I. V. Stalin that “ Quiet Don“still “flows in the wrong direction”, that the author does not even think about reforging Grigory Melekhov into a Bolshevik and, explaining all this with the influence of family, relatives on his wife’s side, proposed ... to move Sholokhov from Veshenskaya to a large industrial center. He applied the same “signalling” method on March 16, 1938, turning to N.I. Yezhov, People’s Commissar of Internal Affairs, with a “request” to “help resolve this issue about O. Mandelstam.” This “help” was expressed in the arrest of the poet in the Samatikha boarding house and a sentence of 5 years in a camp.

Mandelstam Alexander Emilievich(1892–1942) - the middle of the Mandelstam brothers (Shura). Besides him, the poet’s correspondence includes his younger brother Evgeny Emilievich Mandelstam (1898–1979), E. E. Mandelstam’s daughter Tatyana (Tatka).

From poems 1913–1937 Published by: Mandelstam O. Soch. in 2 volumes. M., 1990.

Notebooks. Notes.

“Notes of 1931”, “Notebooks of 1931–1932” were published for the first time in 1969 from copies from the author’s typescripts in volume 3 of the poet’s Collected Works in 4 volumes. Despite all the fragmentation, thematic overlap with essays, autobiographical prose these records, notes have independent meaning. “I turned 40 in January. I have entered the age of the rib and the demon,” such self-characteristics are clearly intended to disrupt the system of a “continuous,” linear narrative, a report on trips and experiences. In the light of their and similar introspections - “I live without improving myself”, “I accepted the oceanic news of Mayakovsky’s death”, etc. - the whole path of the poet’s life, his reverently wary attitude towards the world becomes clearer. Hardly anyone before Mandelstam perceived the ascent to Alatau so difficult and “strange”: “You go and feel an invitation card to Tamerlane in your pocket...”

Beyond these notes and records, however, much remained, which was later revealed in N. Ya. Mandelstam’s “Memoirs.” It turns out that the poet also visited the studio of the great painter Martiros Saryan; Yeghishe Cherents, a wonderful Armenian poet, came to him in Tiflis and, after listening to Mandelstam’s stories and poems, said: “It seems like a book is crawling out of you.”

Names of the poet found in notes and notebooks A. Bezymensky, statesmen like Lakoby Nestor Ivanovich(1893–1936), Chairman of the Council of People's Commissars of Abkhazia, Ch. Darwin, traveler Pallas, naturalists Linnaeus, Lamarck and others - are important, rather, as a reason for introspection, for “tasting” this or that thought.

"Treasonous" lyrics, or love poems

Madrigal. Straw I–II. These poems from 1916 are addressed to the St. Petersburg beauty book Salome Andronikova. Osip Mandelstam visited the estate of Salome Andronikova in Crimea, where he participated in the performance of the collectively composed comedy “Coffee House of Broken Hearts, or Savanarolla in Taurida.” There, at this performance, he met another famous St. Petersburg Venus, Vera Arkadyevna Sudeikina. The poem “A stream of golden honey flowed from a bottle…” (Alushta, 1917) is dedicated to her - the beginning of another cycle that was never continued. This femme fatale - in those years the artist's wife, an actress of an unknown genre - would later become one of the heroines of A. A. Akhmatova's "Poem without a Hero". The changes in her personal life are also brilliant in their own way: in emigration she is the wife of the composer Igor Stravinsky, and after his death, the wife of the famous philanthropist Marquis de Bosset.

“I’m in a round dance of shadows trampling a gentle meadow..” (1920), “I’m on a par with others...” (1920), “The ghostly scene flickers slightly...” (1920), “Take joy from my palms...” (1920) ; “Because I couldn’t hold your hands...” (1920); “In St. Petersburg we will meet again...” (1920) - all these poems, forming a semblance of a cycle, are addressed to Olga Nikolaevna Arbenina, actress Alexandria Theater. A. A. Blok was right - regarding these verses - when he said: “His (Mandelshtam - V.Ch.) poems arise from dreams - very unique ones, lying in the fields of art and nothing more.” True, the witnesses to this speculative romance remembered that Mandelstam and Arbenina “were together in the ballet,” that he read her his poems in private - just during Mayakovsky’s performance at the House of Arts. And he didn’t read, but “sang poetry... and his voice took off like a dove and beat against the crystal pendants of the lampshades and rushed out the window, towards the Neva.” Ida Nappelbaum, the daughter of the famous St. Petersburg photographer M. Nappelbaum, who remembered these details, for whom Arbenina was simply Olechka, added the following observation of the fate of the unfortunate Mandelstam: “The poet did not have an open visor, it consisted of two profiles - sunny and shadowy. And he turned around first one side, then the other... He fought in the cage of life.” (Quoted from the book: O. Mandelstam. My century, my beast. - M., 2002. - P. 140, 141). Conjectures of another memoirist E. Gershtein about a kind of rivalry - “in the hungry winter of 1920, both of them (Mandelshtam and Gumilyov - V.Ch.) sought the love of Olga Nikolaevna Arbenina in Petrograd” - should, apparently, be left aside as unsubstantiated and somewhat diluting the entire sublime, mythological structure of Mandelstam’s messages, the very image of St. Petersburg, the keen metaphorism, the richness of semantic associations of these love lyrics.

« Melpomene overwhelmed with silk», Melpomene- muse of tragedy, one of the nine beautiful companions of Apollo; " Nothing, dove Eurydice"Eurydice - the wife of the great singer Orpheus, bitten in the leg by a snake and carried to Hades. Orpheus was allowed - after his songs, from which all nature cried - by the lord of Hades and his wife Persephone to take Eurydice out with one condition: “But while traveling through the underworld, you must not look back. Remember! You look back, and Eurydice will immediately leave you and return forever to my kingdom.” Not hearing the steps of the ethereal shadow behind him, fearing that Eurydice had fallen behind, Orpheus still looked back...

“And a huge heap of immortal roses / Cyprida has in her arms...” Cypris(or Aphrodite) - eternally young, the most beautiful of the goddesses in a wreath of fragrant flowers was born from snow-white foam sea ​​waves, who brought it to the island of Cyprus. According to legend, wherever Aphrodite steps, flowers grow magnificently. This detail, like the mention of the omission (“ I don't need a night pass"), refute the statements of N. Ya. Mandelstam, according to which the poems “In St. Petersburg we will meet again” are dedicated to her, and not to O. N. Arbenina. However, “ blissful meaningless word“- this is also from the sphere of life of O. N. Arbenina, an actress created “for a comedic squabble.” She sincerely did not understand, having read the entire cycle of poems about herself: “It is not clear why such a tragedy turned out in poetry - now I understand his life with sadness, and our short acquaintance is joyful” (from a 1974 letter from O. N. Arbenina to the artist A. Malishevsky).

“Life has fallen like lightning...”, “There is behind the palace doll...”, “From the camp of a dark street...” (all - 1925), “Isaky froze on dead eyelashes” (1935), “Is it possible dead woman praise..." (1935, 1936) - microcycle of messages, dialogue with Olga Alexandrovna Vaksel(1903–1932), “young extravagant”, “Buttercup”, in which O. Mandelstam followed all the rules of the pre-revolutionary good manners asked for “hands and hearts” in 1924, even deciding to leave N. Ya. Mandelstam. The memoirs of O. A. Vaksel’s son A. Smolyevsky indicate that this “madwoman,” according to legend and N. Ya. Mandelstam’s assessments, not only bore the mark of something tragic. “The courtship of one poet from the group of Acmeists, who married “a prose artist” and almost stopped writing poetry” (that is, Mandelstam), she accepted, as it turned out from her memories, not at all carefree, not superficially, not at all without trepidation. After the break with O. Mandelstam, the courtship of his brother Evgeny Mandelstam in 1927, O. A. Vaksel married (in 1932) the Norwegian diplomat H. Irgen-Wistendaal, but, leaving with him for Oslo, just three weeks after arrival to his warm and hospitable home, in an acute attack of nostalgia, she shot herself. On the eve of the fatal shot - not without the impact of the death of V. Mayakovsky! - she wrote a poem addressed to both Mandelstam and Russia:

I paid generously until the end

For the joy of our meetings, for the tenderness of your gazes,

For the charm of your lips and for the damned city,

For the roses of an aged face.

Now you will drink all the bitterness of my tears,

In sleepless nights slowly shed,

You will read my long, long scroll,

You'll change your mind every single verse.

But the paradise in which I live is too small,

But the poison I feed on is too sweet.

So every day I outgrow myself.

I see miracles in dreams and in reality,

But what I love is not available now,

And only one temptation: to fall asleep and not wake up...

"Master of Guilty Glances"(1934), or “Turkish Woman” as designated by A. A. Akhmatova, who considered it the best love poem of the 20th century, is addressed to the poetess and translator Maria Sergeevna Petrovykh (1908–1979). For her, who grew up on Yaroslavl soil and in the atmosphere of “recklessly loving childhood” and deeply assimilated the school of classical Russian verse, she was characterized by a desire for the significance of the spiritual world of the creator, for confession, for the ability to “stay silent before poetry.” Her poems and translations - especially from the Armenian language - were highly appreciated by B. Pasternak, A. Tarkovsky, A. Akhmatova, G. Shengeli. The real appearance of this remarkable woman, unfortunately, was distorted in the memoirs of N. Ya. Mandelstam, who called her a “hunter” (of other people’s husbands) after Mandelstam’s unrequited love for her, and E. Gershtein, one of the poet’s best friends, who created a trivial, alas, the image of M. S. Petrov, a salon seductress who played dangerous games with two at once - the young L. N. Gumilyov “Gumilevushka”, and O. Mandelstam. It is surprising that no objections from the family of M. S. Petrovs or from S. I. Lipkin stopped the compilers of a generally very useful, informative biographical book about Mandelstam “My Age, My Beast” from the next concentration of objectively humiliating details: then she, M. S. Petrov, married woman, fights off the passionate embrace of “Levushka,” and contemporaries, according to E. Gershtein, see him scratched by Marusya, a “wild cat,” then Maria Sergeevna herself left the poet’s room, “to the displeasure of his wife,” with large spots on her face and “ in an excited state” (“My Age, My Beast.” P. 479). The poet's poetic correctness regarding " Turkish girls dear", his prayers " You, Maria, help those who are dying", the most beautiful metaphor " flying red, this pathetic crescent of lips“- all this, of course, corrects a trivial situation. It is unlikely that Mandelstam would have spoken about the vulgar seductress, the “huntress” in another poem, attributed entirely only to N. Ya. Mandelstam:

Well, I should burn a black candle for you,

Don’t dare to burn a black candle and pray.

“I bring this greenery to my lips...”; “The buds stick with a sticky oath...”; “Involuntarily falling to the empty ground...”; “There are women native to the damp earth...” - these poems (all from 1937), like a whole series comic poems dedicated to Natalya Shtempel, with whom the disgraced poet was friends in Voronezh. According to her, he, serious and concentrated, having read them to her, asked the question himself:

"- What is this?

I did not understand the question and continued to remain silent. “This is love poetry,” he answered for me. “This is the best thing I wrote.” And he handed me a piece of paper.”

Application. Memories. Essay

Marina Tsvetaeva. Protecting your ex."The Defense of the Former" is part of a longer essay, "The Story of a Dedication", first published in the Oxford Slavonic Papers 1914 XI. On the memory screen of the tragic Russian poetess of the 20th century, a “Tsvetaevsky” image of the poet appears - against the backdrop of Voloshin’s Koktebel. The essay contains motifs of polemics and a fantastic chronicle of life in that “shelter of the muses” founded by M. A. Voloshin: there is no need to go into it... Thanks to the acute nostalgic melancholy of M. I. Tsvetaeva in 1931, the modern reader is transported into the blissful atmosphere countries of ignorance, games, acting, in the artistic Silver Age, which had not yet ended “above the black and deaf sea.”

Anastasia Tsvetaeva, From memories of Marina Tsvetaeva and Osip Mandelstam. In the book. Tsvetaeva Anastasia. Memories. M., 1974.

Of course, M.I. Tsvetaeva’s younger sister could not understand the inherently complex process of Mandelstam’s entry into Moscow. He saw a lot through his prism:

Tender Assumption - Florence in Moscow.

Within the walls of the Acropolis, sadness consumed me

By Russian name and Russian beauty.

She could hardly have guessed that through the church architecture, and even the “tender” one, next to the word “Florence” (that is, “blooming”), the surname “Tsvetaeva” also came to life for him. Even less intelligible to the young Muscovite is this overlap of Mandelstam’s feelings: “Mandelshtam somehow - through iconic coloring or otherwise - caught the black and yellow contrast of Jerusalem” (L. M. Vidgof. Mandelstam’s Moscow. M., 1998. P. 24) .

At the same time, the naive consciousness of a girl in the 1910s perfectly captured both the “interior of the era” and many of O. E. Mandelstam’s mental states.

Makovsky S.K. Osip Mandelstam “Portraits of Contemporaries”

From the book by S. K. Makovsky “On Parnassus” Silver Age“” (Munich, 1962).

Sergei Konstantinovich Makovsky (1877–1962) - poet, critic, art critic, publisher - was the son famous portrait painter, historical painter K.E. Makovsky, a native St. Petersburger who grew up among artists, performers, and poets of the early 20th century. Many years after his St. Petersburg youth - with its “World of Art” salons, theater premieres, poetry collections, books about painting and artists - S. K. Makovsky will write: “And through the foggy lace foliage, / As if covered in a cobweb, / I I feel a different reality, / Touching the unified mystery” (“Calm”).

The main creation of S.K. Makovsky in the pre-revolutionary era - the magazine "Apollo" (1909–1917), where he received the young Mandelstam - is also a “foggy-lace” creation, full of the spirit of contemplation, the cult of beauty and “intrinsic” creativity. From these positions, S. K. Makovsky reproduces the debut and first steps in the poetry of the author of “The Stone” O. E. Mandelstam. All the acmeism of the young poet with his clarity of intonation and sharpness of lines, weight and concreteness of the word is, as it were, the realization of his own, S. K. Makovsky, longing for the “Apollonian” beginning, classical clarity. In general, memories of O. E. Mandelstam, like the entire book “On Parnassus of the Silver Age,” are marked by thickened emigrant nostalgia for a bygone, fleeting era, notes of farewell to a gentle, artistic age: “...But forget you, / Raised to the heights of Parnassus - you can’t! / In the days of worries, struggles, needs, you looked for / Forward untrodden paths...” S.K. Makovsky foresaw the fate of his young Parnassian friend, a completely harmonious “Apollonian” poet, capable of expressing with classical clarity the terrible instability of time, the horror of the collapse of the former environment and culture, an eternal traveler on untrodden paths.

Fleeting guesses, rather slips of the tongue by S.K. Makovsky about Mandelstam’s alleged attempts after 1917 to “adapt” to the Bolsheviks, to “soften” his image of a “plebeian writer” by birth and a freethinker without political prejudices, are very controversial, vague and unsubstantiated. These “facts” are collected second-hand. S.K. Makovsky, however, always remembers what a helpless “bird of God” Mandelstam was, how excusable his compromise with the wolfhound century was.

Erenburg I. G. Mandelstam

From the book “Russian Poets” (Berlin, 1922).

Ilya Grigorievich Erenburg (1891–1967) - prose writer, poet, publicist - published his first book of poems in 1910. In 1918–1923, during the period of completing a series of essays on Russian poets, which included a portrait of O. E. Mandelstam, he published 10 books of poetry, among which stood out “Prayer for Russia” (1918), which was then recognized as counter-revolutionary. I. Ehrenburg’s perception of poetry and the entire tragic fate of Mandelstam was certainly influenced by the essay’s own position: flight from Moscow to Kyiv after a period of arrests, departure in 1921 from Russia to Berlin and Paris (his gymnasium friend N. I. Bukharin helped him in this, personal friend of both Ehrenburg and partly Mandelstam) and the experience of comprehending human destinies in the novel about the adventures of the Gomel tailor Lazik, the “Jewish Schweik” (“The Turbulent Life of Lazik Roytshvanets”). Osip Mandelstam for Ehrenburg is a nomad, obsessed with inspiration, a receptacle for the memory of culture, always exposed to dangers, watching only for “flashes of consciousness,” looking for happy states when “the soul hangs over the winged abyss, / And music will not save from the abyss...”.

Subsequently, I. G. Erenburg will create a more multifaceted image of the wanderer O. E. Mandelstam of the 20s in the book “People, Years, Life” (In the 3rd vol. M., 1990). Gleb Struve, a researcher of Mandelstam’s work, will note the merit of I. G. Erenburg as the creator of this image of the poet of the “Silver Age”. “He, Mandelstam, who fought with such enthusiasm on the eve of the revolution both against the Symbolists and the Futurists, will appear, perhaps, as the most fully synthesized... symbolism, acmeism and futurism" (G. Struve. About four poets. Blok. Sologub. Gumilyov. Mandelstam. London, 1981. P. 186).

Mandelstam N. Ya. Large form. Tragedy. Unity of flow. "Orchestras and fimelas". Prodigal son. The beginning and the end

Published based on the text of “Memoirs” by N. Ya. Mandelstam. Book 2. M., 1990.

Osip Mandelstam's widow Nadezhda Yakovlevna Mandelstam lived a long life (1899–1980). Osip Mandelstam married her, the sister of the poet Yevgeny Khazin (her maiden name), in 1919. From all the details of their spiritual and everyday life, wanderings in the 20s and 30s, one can draw a general conclusion that their marriage can be called happy, that Mandelstam could not imagine his poetic destiny without “tenderness,” as he called N. Ya. Mandelstam. She accompanied him twice - to Cherdyn, Voronezh - into exile, she relieved the torment of his complete everyday disorder, found patrons, maintained connections with relatives, warned against dangerous decisions and false friends. The extent of the poet’s gratitude to N. Ya. Mandelstam is evidenced by many poems (“Your tender shoulders blush under the lashes”), and the poet’s readiness to endure separation for the sake of his wife’s health, and to stand up for her honor - in particular after a domestic quarrel in one of the writers’ communal apartments with A. N. Tolstoy, with S. P. Borodin (Sarkis Amirdzhan). Hot-tempered, giving the impression of a person with an unbalanced psyche, the poet once attempted suicide (in Cherdyn), and, moreover, surrounded by an atmosphere of surveillance, mistrust, and alienation, demanded exceptional attention from the “tender one.” In addition, it was necessary, as A. Vertinsky sang, to “forgive my unnecessary loves” - in O. Vaksel, M. Petrovs... Moreover, in the complete absence of permanent earnings, homelessness, the presence of “evil housing”, where she made her way through the shoddy walls “a stream of domestic fear.”

After the death of the poet, N. Ya. Mandelstam, with enviable tenacity, self-sacrifice, and risk, saved the poet’s poetic heritage and restored what replaced the diary, notebooks- everyday conversations, versions of poems recorded from voice, preserved in the memory of contemporaries (in particular, A. A. Akhmatova, who was close to her). The famous researcher of the poetry of the “Silver Age” M.K. Polivanov was right when he noted, “that often Nadezhda Yakovlevna and Anna Andreevna Akhmatova “together recalled and clarified everything that they both knew about Mandelstam...”, therefore the books “Memoirs” by N. Ya Mandelstam became an invaluable commentary on everything written by Osip Mandelstam and material for his biography” (K. M. Polivanov. Preface to book 2 of “Memoirs” by N. Ya. Mandelstam. M., 1990. P. 6.).

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Plants, factories, and railways are being built in the country. The construction of the railway track between Moscow and St. Petersburg (1843-1851), named in honor of Emperor Nicholas I, the Nikolaev Railway, is being completed. Tens of thousands of peasants were herded to build the road. People had to work with their bare hands, knee-deep in swamp water. They lived from hand to mouth, in damp, cold dugouts; if anyone refused backbreaking work, they were beaten with whips. There were many sick people who often died where they worked. This road was built on Russian bones, so the people said.

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In the spring of 1865, the new Emperor Alexander II issued a decree on some freedom in the press - in newspapers and magazines. The Tsar's decree on freedom of the press turned out to be completely false.

In 1865, the October book of Sovremennik was published, in which Nekrasov’s poem “The Railway” was published. The Main Directorate for Press Affairs threatened to close the magazine. The censor saw in this work “a terrible slander, set out in very sonorous verses.” “The author allows himself,” the censor noted, “even to make an arbitrary calculation of the martyrs who died for the railway, claiming that there are five thousand of them.” In fact, this poem was a work of the greatest truth. Nekrasov expressed in it the “thousand-year” torment of working people under serfdom and capitalism. That people's labor in Russia at that time was inhumane was known and seen by many, but Nekrasov was the first and only Russian poet to speak about it loudly, menacingly and angryly, as the people themselves would have said if they had not been so slavishly subjugated.

Chapter I. "Glorious autumn! ...

Who are these two, dad and Vanya? The man in the red-lined coat is a general. Vanya - the general's son - is dressed in a coachman's jacket - clothes ordinary people. This was the fashion in the last century: rich parents dressed their children in the clothes of the common people. When asked by his son who built this road, the general replies: “Count Pyotr Andreevich Kleinmichel, darling!”...

N.A. Nekrasov begins his poem with a description of the wild, fertile picture of nature. The poet creates a beautiful autumn picture the most simple colors. His air is healthy, vigorous, the river is icy, the ice is like melting sugar; the withered grass near the forest resembles a soft bed in which you can sleep. This glorious autumn pours cheerfulness and strength into the poet’s soul.

The poet is pleased to see everything: a carpet made of autumn leaves, frosty nights, clear days, swamps, hummocks. He admires the beauty of nature and deeply loves his homeland:

Everything is fine under the moonlight,

I recognize my native Rus' everywhere!

The poet calls his homeland native Russia according to the folk. This is how folk songs sang about mothers. Dear mother - the one who gave birth to you and raised you.

A beautiful picture of a quiet autumn, nature where “there is no ugliness” is replaced by another: ugliness exists in human relationships, “the torment of people, but in contrast they seem even more monstrous against the backdrop of this fertile nature.”

The image of the railway first appears at the end of the first chapter:

I rush quickly along cast iron rails,

I think my thoughts...

The sounds [h] and [u] create in the reader and listener the impression of the speed of movement (“I’m flying”) and, at the same time, the depth and importance of the poet’s thoughts (“I’m thinking….”) So, the railway along which the poet is traveling becomes a poetic image of him native land, homeland. But, admiring the beauty of this land, the poet cannot help but think about the suffering of his people. HE cannot help but object to the general’s words in the epigraph of the poem. For the general, it was as if those thousands of serfs whose labor built the road did not exist. And the poet tells the young passenger Vanya the truth about its builders.

Chapter II. "Peaceful children of labor."

The second chapter is central to the work. This is a kind of response from Nekrasov to the general’s claims that the road was built by Count Kleimichel. Why does the poet not want to keep Vanya in “charm”? Vanya is smart, inquisitive, inquisitive, probably the poet liked his smart face, kind eyes, he talks about him “smart Vanya”, believes that the seeds of truth will fall on fertile soil. Objecting to the general, the poet asks for permission to “show Vanya the truth.” Showing the truth means correctly answering the question about the real builder of the railroad.

This work, Vanya, was terribly enormous -

Not enough for one!

The poet uses the epithet “huge” to characterize the enormous scale of construction. Such work was beyond the power of one person, be it Kleinmichel or even the king himself. The people are the true creator of the railway.

By order of Tsar Nicholas I, peasants were herded from all corners of Russia to build the road, and at the same time crowds of men, crushed by poverty and ruined by the landowners, rushed to the railway. They were driven by hunger, which subjugated people against their will. He spares neither the old nor the young. The poet builds this image as a symbolic inevitability that haunts a disadvantaged person. The poet’s terrible, hopeless words about the king’s hunger lead to sad reflections: the army, the workers’ artels of stonemasons and weavers, the hard peasant labor - everyone is “driven” by hunger, there is nothing sublime in such work, only one fear is not to die of hunger.

Many are in a terrible struggle,

Having brought these barren wilds back to life,

They found a coffin here...

People revived these remote places, breathed life into the road, but for themselves they found a “coffin” - death. Nekrasov uses the technique of antithesis - opposition. The poet calls work on this disastrous road a “terrible struggle” - against disease, hunger, and need.

The lunar landscape suddenly changes, and gloomy, tragic colors appear in it more and more. The native side is beautiful, but also sad.

The path is straight: the embankments are narrow,

Columns, rails, bridges.

And on the sides there are all Russian bones...

Nekrasov calls the "cast iron rails" "road". In one stanza there are many words with diminutive suffixes: path, columns, bones. Under the cover of yellow leaves and hummocks of moss swamps, the poet seems to see “Russian bones” - in these words of the poet there is deep sympathy for the dead, hence the image of the path. Nekrasov's verse sounds like folk song about human grief and suffering.

N.A. Nekrasov paints before us a picture of “Songs of the Dead”. At first we see only the shadow of a terrible secret falling on the carriage windows. And then the dead themselves ran along the sides of the road, overtaking the train. The bright moonlit night is filled with groans, the clanking of rusty shovels, the gnashing of teeth, and the song-cry. The colors are mixed with sounds, terrible, illusory. Nekrasov chooses a moonlit night to better see these shadows. The poet knew well the folk legends and beliefs in which the moonlit night was an indispensable background of otherworldly forces. And so - the walls of the carriage seem to move apart, and then disappear altogether - and a wide panorama of folk Rus' appears. Once again the “road” gives way to the “expensive cast-iron road”, the dead are singing their song, or it’s a cry….

There is a contradiction in the poem: labor is hard labor, labor is a great good and feat. “We love to see our work” - these people are shadows admiring their work. With their backs always bent, in the heat, cold, hungry and sick, they littered the entire road surface with their “bones.” The poem contains a contradiction not of the poet, but of life itself. At the cost of immeasurable suffering and the hardest labor of millions of people, the greatness of the homeland was achieved. And the people deserve all the more glory - not Kleinmichel, not the king, not the “literate foremen” (there is so much contempt in this word for the literate people - stupid, semi-literate rulers of human lives), but those same “God’s warriors” who in pain created all the blessings of the earth.

Nekrasov suddenly breaks off this “wild singing,” because he is worried that Vanya will be frightened by this song and decides to enter into a conversation about public construction himself. From all over Rus', people flocked to the railway: from Volkhov, from the Oka and Mother Volga. The poet supplements the word “Volga” with the epithet “mother”, because the great Russian river was Nekrasov’s poetic homeland.

The poet calls the peasant men Vanya's brothers. He tries to convince “smart Vanya” that the peasants are the creators of material wealth, he wants Vanya to see brothers in these Russian people. Feeling that Vanya is frightened by the terrible story, the poet passionately convinces the boy:

It's a shame to be timid, to cover yourself with a glove,

You are no longer small, with Russian hair….

The general - Vanya's father - believes that the child should not know the truth, that his impressionable soul must be protected:

A spectacle of death, sadness

It is a sin to outrage a child's soul.

The poet has a different opinion. The best teacher is the hard, undisguised truth, from which you cannot hide behind a glove. The general convinces his son that the road was built by Count Kleinmichel, and the poet shows the true creators of the road. Yes, you need to know the most bitter truth in order to become a citizen of the “dear fatherland”, to love the people, to teach them to fight for their happiness.

The poet, creating the image of a Belarusian, draws our attention to the fact that work for this unfortunate man became a punishment, took away all his strength: he, like an insensitive robot, “stupidly remains silent”, “mechanically hammers the frozen ground with a rusty shovel.” But, turning to Vanya, the author notes:

This noble habit of work

It would be a good idea for us to share with you!

The poet is convinced: any work is noble. A person must make work his habit, the basis of life. Vanya comes from a rich family. In the future, he is the owner of men, perhaps he will choose like his father, military service. The poet seems to be calling: in your future adult life, remember this Belarusian more often, awaken in your soul respect for the common people. Hence the abundance of verbs in the imperative mood. Words by N.A. Nekrasov was called to action.

The second chapter ends with enthusiastic words in praise of the people's labor, since the poet believed: labor is the arbiter of well-being on earth.

In the penultimate four lines, the same word is repeated four times: “carried out,” “carried out.” But the meaning of these verbs is not the same. “The Russian people have endured enough,” they endured it, and completed it at the cost of their own lives. “He took out this railway too” - he built it, completed it at the cost of his own lives. In the combination of the words “iron road,” the poet emphasizes the word “iron,” implying the figurative meaning of the word. The railway is a soulless, merciless road that has ruined thousands of lives.

“He will endure everything, the Lord will not send!” Nekrasov used the verb in the future tense because he is confident that the people will withstand the upcoming trials sent by God with dignity. The poet believes that the people will achieve happiness for themselves. The road, the little road, the railway turns into “a wide, clear road to a bright future.”

The first and second chapters of the poem are a kind of monologue by the poet. Vanya and the general are just listeners.

Chapter III. "...The people created all this...".

The third chapter opens with Vanya's awakening. It turns out that a crowd of dead people on a frosty moonlit night is... “an amazing dream.” Vanya says that he saw in a dream how a crowd of five thousand men appeared before God and he pointed out: “Here they are, the builders of our road!” The general did not believe in Vanya’s dream and decides to express his point of view in a dispute with the poet, who inspired the boy with the truth about the true builders of the road. Although, more precisely, the general does not argue with his interlocutor, he is simply confident that he is right. According to the general, the people cannot create anything great, except perhaps stove pots. The general scolds the people, calling them “barbarian,” “a wild bunch of drunkards.” According to him, the people, whether “Slavic”, “Anglo-Saxon”, or “German”, do not know how to create, they are only capable of destroying.

The poet tries to object to the general, saying that he told all this not for him, but for Vanya. Nekrasov “showed” the paintings to the child for a long time and convincingly folk life, so that Vanya would be imbued with faith in the people, so that he would stop “hiding himself with a glove” and start? boldly object to his father, calling on God for help: it was he who pointed out true heroes railway. The general's assertion about the inability of the "barbarians" to create "miracles of art" is unconvincing. No matter how much the poet’s lyrical complicity in the fate of the people, how true and interesting his story is, which makes us imagine, experience, and feel the torment that befell the people, the general is just as helpless in his statements. The argument is over. The boy, thanks to the poet, knows the truth.

Chapter IV. " Bright side people's life.

The general does not need the terrible, painful, merciless truth. He calls for showing the child the “bright side.” "Glad to show you!" - the fourth chapter begins with this exclamation.

The work is finished - "fatal labors." The German is laying rails, the dead are buried in the ground, the sick are hidden in dugouts. Workers crowded around the office - waiting for their salaries. The foreman and the contractor deducted everything from them: for the bathhouse when they were sick. People are being robbed, but they are submissive, passive: they “give up”, and still owe money.

And so the “venerable” meadowsweet merchant goes to see his work. He has power and money, and he also has honor. Thick, dense, small, “red as copper.” The face is well-fed and shiny with fat. He forces the people to take off their hats: “Hats off - if I say!” The people make way for him. Kupchina doesn’t waste a lot of words on people. He stands with his arms akimbo, constantly wiping the sweat from his face. The merchant “forgives” them the arrears, graciously “gives” them this debt, and treats them to a barrel of wine. Then the workers harnessed themselves “to joy” to the cart, put the meadowsweet in it and shouted “Hurray!” they rushed him along the road.

Chukovsky said that “the darkest stanzas of The Railway are not those where the misfortunes of people are depicted, but those where the poet talks about their tolerance, their always readiness to humbly forgive their tormentors.” The poet showed there a depressing picture of the reconciliation of the people with their oppressors, the triumph of the fat contractor and the “literate” - foremen. A cart drawn by people, in which a meadowsweet sits, jubilant cries of “Hurray!” - there is something creepy in this symbolic picture, no less terrible than the crowd of dead people that Vanya saw in his dream. This is the truth, which cannot and should not leave indifferent everyone who cares about their homeland. There are many exclamation marks at the end of the poem, but it ends with a question and an ellipsis:

It seems difficult to see a more gratifying picture

Shall I draw, General? ….

This material is part of Alla Balandina's teaching resource kit.

Comment is a system of additions to the text, which together reveal its meaning in more detail. Commentaries are especially necessary for the modern reader to understand the works of the past.

Comments differ in the tasks assigned to them and the objects of commenting.

The following types of comments are distinguished:

1. a real commentary explaining the realities (various objects of the material and spiritual life of society that are found in the work - facts, historical names, events, etc.)

2. historical and literary commentary, revealing the meaning and artistic features of the work, its significance and place in the historical and literary process;

3. dictionary commentary, explaining words and figures of speech that are incomprehensible to the reader, and built in the form of an alphabetical dictionary;

4. textual commentary containing information of a textual nature;

5. historical and textual commentary containing information on the history of the creation and study of the text of the work;

6. editorial and publishing commentary containing an explanation of the principles and techniques of preparing the text of a work for publication.

To complete tasks All-Russian Olympiad for schoolchildren in literature, the first three comments are relevant.

Target: present in a concise form full picture the fate of the work in connection with the era, explain to the reader its ideological content, talk about how the work was received by readers and critics of that time, reveal the significance of the work in the life and work of the writer, etc.

It is necessary to connect the work with its time - to make it easier for the reader to understand this connection, and in some cases, to find the only correct way to clarify the content disguised by the author.

Real comment

Target: give explanations of objects, persons, events mentioned in the work, i.e. information about realities. Interpretation and only then information.

Types of realities: geographical, ethnographic (names and nicknames), mythological and folklore, everyday, socio-historical (institutions, organizations, ranks, titles, household items).

The forms of real comments are varied: from short information, help to alphabetical and systematized indexes, glossaries, or illustrated documentary-type material.

Dictionary (or linguistic) commentary

Target: explain to the reader those words and figures of speech that differ from the usual usage in modern literary language and therefore may not be understood by the reader or misunderstood.

Archaisms, neologisms, dialectisms, foreign borrowings, professionalisms, words with changed meanings, folk etymology, etc. - all this is material for a dictionary commentary. Explanations are given of the writer's grammar and language, including syntax and phraseology.

Unlike a real commentary, the interpreted word here is the object of linguistic analysis.

When completing an Olympiad task like: “Create a historical and literary commentary on a text (an excerpt from the text),” you should include in your work elements of not only historical and literary commentary itself, but also real and linguistic commentary, maximally demonstrating your erudition.

Examples of performing historical and literary commentary

1) Completed by a professional literary critic as a single, coherent text

On April 5, the day after Karakozov’s assassination attempt on Alexander II, Nekrasov visited several high-ranking officials, including M. N. Muravyov’s son-in-law, Jägermeister Sergei Shuvalov, the Minister of the Adlerberg Court, G. A. Stroganov, in order to find out what he should expect after Karakozov's shot "Sovremennik", and received from them very disappointing information on this matter. On April 6, at an emergency meeting of the Literary Fund, he, along with its other members, signed a loyal address to Alexander II. On April 9, at a gala dinner at the English Club in honor of the “savior of the Tsar” O. I. Komissarov, Nekrasov read a poem dedicated to him. On April 16, at a gala dinner at the English Club in honor of M. N. Muravyov, Nekrasov read a “madrigal” praising this latter... This fact especially outraged Nekrasov’s former “allies.”

However, already on the eve of this speech, Nekrasov received a note from F. Tolstoy, in which he informed him that the fate of the “Contemporary” was already sealed and all of Nekrasov’s efforts were in vain. On the twenty-sixth of April, Nekrasov published another “book” (No. 4) of Sovremennik, not only publishing poems to Komissarov in it, but also publishing a large loyal article by Rozanov about the event of April 4.

Opinions about Nekrasov’s “betrayal” of his ideals are growing among society. However, this is not true. This fact is confirmed by the fact that on the evening of April 16, having returned from the English Club, being in a state of shock, Nekrasov writes his poem:

The enemy rejoices, remains silent in bewilderment

Yesterday's friend, shaking his head,

Both you and you recoiled in embarrassment,

Constantly standing in front of me

Great suffering shadows,

About whose fate I wept so bitterly,

On whose coffins I knelt

And he repeated oaths of revenge menacingly.

But the impersonal ones shout: we rejoice!

Rushing into the arms of a new slave

And nailing you with a fat kiss

The unfortunate one is to be pilloried.

(“The enemy rejoices, remains silent in bewilderment...”)

Another fact is no less indicative. Soon after the April issue of Sovremennik was published, Nekrasov was not afraid to show up at the apartment of the newly arrested Eliseev. This is how Eliseev describes this episode in his memoirs: “The next day after my arrest, Nekrasov bravely came to my apartment to inquire what happened and how. I speak bravely because not one of my comrades and, in general, none of the Sovremennik employees decided to do this. For from the very moment when the news of Karakozov’s shot became known throughout St. Petersburg, everyone concerned with literature immediately understood that no matter how the investigation went, literature, according to our established custom, would still be the first to be brought to justice, and therefore, everyone settled at home, trying to have as little communication as possible between themselves, except, of course, in cases of extreme need.” (Eliseev G.Z. From memoirs // 37:128)

But no matter how great the sacrifices made by Nekrasov in April 1866 were, they did not achieve their goal. From the “Case of the special commission chaired by Prince P. P. Gagarin (began on May 13, 1866, decided on August 21 of the same year)” it is clear that the commission, at the insistence of M. N. Muravyov, at a meeting on May 23 decided to “instruct the Minister of Internal Affairs It is now time to completely stop publishing Sovremennik and Russian Word (42:174). On June 1, Pypin, who replaced Nekrasov, who had left for Karabikha, as editor-in-chief of Sovremennik, received official notice of the banning of the magazine. All Nekrasov’s actions aimed at preserving the magazine were in vain. Moreover, Nekrasov’s associates perceived the forced rapprochement with the “conservative camp” as treason; most of them did not understand the forced nature of this measure. Nekrasov found himself, as it were, “under a double blow” - from ideological enemies and from yesterday’s comrades-in-arms and like-minded people. Nekrasov suffered several blows. The first blow was that he was forced to “refract himself,” refract his convictions. The second blow is the ineffectiveness of such actions. And the third, most powerful thing is that all his yesterday’s friends turned away from him. The mood of distrust towards Nekrasov and condemnation of his actions grew in society.

2) Completed by the student as a series of extracts from the text, accompanied by commentary on semantic difficulties

A.S. Pushkin “D.V. Davydov"

To you the singer, to you the hero!

I couldn't follow you

With cannon thunder, in fire

Ride a mad horse.

Rider of the humble Pegasus,

I wore old Parnassus

Out of fashion uniform:

But even in this difficult service,

And then, oh my wonderful rider,

You are my father and commander.

Here is my Pugach - at first sight

He is visible - a rogue, a straight Cossack!

In your vanguard

He would be a dashing officer.

Denis Vasilievich Davydov- a contemporary of A. S. Pushkin, who achieved success in his military career: he held the rank of lieutenant general, and was the commander of one of the partisan detachments during the Patriotic War of 1812.

“To you a singer, to you a hero!”

Denis Davydov is known not only as a Russian hero-warrior, but also as a Russian poet, a representative of “hussar poetry” or “one of the most poetic persons in the Russian army” (according to his own description).

"I couldn't follow you

With cannon thunder, in fire

Ride a mad horse..."

Pushkin studied at the Tsarskoye Selo Lyceum and was still very young when Napoleon invaded Russia. He and his comrades dreamed of “cannon thunder” and “mad horse” and rushed into battle, inspired by patriotic feeling. But none of them managed to take part in hostilities.

"Rider of the humble Pegasus,

I wore old Parnassus

Out of fashion uniform"

Pegasus- V Greek mythology- a winged horse, a favorite of the muses, a symbol of inspired poetic creativity.

Parnassus- a sacred mountain in Greece, was considered the habitat of the muses and Apollo.

Most likely, Pushkin hints in these lines about his adherence in his lyceum years to the canons of classicist poetry, which was already outdated at that time, while the poetry of D.V. Davydova bore the features of romanticism.

“But even in this difficult service,

And then, oh my wonderful rider,

You are my father and commander..."

Pushkin was still studying at the Lyceum when D.V. Davydov, the legendary partisan, became famous as a poet. His poems had a great influence on the work of the young poet; “soldier’s” rhymes also found a response in Pushkin’s works. Examples include the poems “Feasting Students” and “Delvig”. And, of course, the poem itself “To you a singer, to you a hero...” was written in the spirit of the poetry of Denis Davydov.

“Here is my Pugach - at first sight

He is visible - a rogue, a straight Cossack!

This poem was sent by Pushkin to Davydov, who arrived in St. Petersburg in 1836, along with the book “The History of the Pugachev Rebellion” a year after its publication. The lines contain a hint of Davydov’s character traits - his direct disposition, ardor and straightforwardness, associated with Cossack prowess. It was not for nothing that the Cossacks themselves, who were in his service, loved him so much.

Vorozhtsova Anastasia, 10th grade


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Alla Balandina
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